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The leaves are falling
Like red and gold confetti
Welcoming autumn
This is my submission to :iconlive-love-write:'s writing prompt, the theme this week being autumn. Written in the haiku format.
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here: [link]

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.
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Created-By-Caz Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much!
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I absolutely adore how you made the little things matter in this piece--and comparing the falling leaves to confetti? Excellent! Nice work on this.
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Created-By-Caz Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for suggesting me for a DLD! It was a lovely surprise to find I had been featured.

I'm glad you enjoyed the haiku. I always had a soft spot for this one - I love autumn, especially the colours and the haiku just seemed the perfect way to express it.
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome.
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010   General Artist
I'm really liking all the autumn haikus; they're all so different. :heart:

I love the use of 'red and gold confetti', I have never heard that saying before I don't think; and it works so well.
Great job :heart:
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Created-By-Caz Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much, for both the comment and the fave. I got the idea of confetti from walking under some trees that were shedding leaves - the sun was shining and picking up the colours and it reminded me of confetti. The haiku came from that image.
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WorldWar-Tori Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010   General Artist
I can see it. That's fantastic. Thank you for sharing. :heart:
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cordefr Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010
Gold leaves of autumn
Mean winter is closing in...
Hibernating dreams
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:iconcreated-by-caz:
Created-By-Caz Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice!:)
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AnnamaeTezuka Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful :)
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Created-By-Caz Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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AnnamaeTezuka Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :D
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angelwbrokenwings Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
Love the descriptive writing here.:clap:
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Created-By-Caz Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I was thinking about the falling leaves and the image of confetti came to mind, as did the words of the haiku.
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sliferred123 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
nice imagery with the red and gold confetti. nice haiku
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Created-By-Caz Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
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ED3765 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Student Writer
short, but sums up all of fall perfectly. very nice caz :)
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Created-By-Caz Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks Ed, glad you enjoyed it!:)
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my-tragic-truth Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
So short but still amazing!
;) love it.
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Created-By-Caz Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.:D
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David-presents Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
That's very pretty, Caz. :heart:
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Created-By-Caz Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, my love. There's just something about the autumn colours that appeals to me. Glad you liked it and thank you for the help.:heart:
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